September 7th 1805
Today while traveling we came upon a peculiar boy the age of about 13 or 14. When Sea walked up to the boy he darted away. We hope he is in a village near by so we can get food and rest our aching muscles. The boy was Nez Pierce and he was up on the hill finding his spirit guide. also the tribe fed us delicious dog meat. Seaman didn't seem too interested in it though. We also met a very wise woman Watkueis, Who's grandson was on the hill, and he was delighted to see "Mountain Dog" or Seaman.
6 comments:
great story on the little boy
uh yeah same as erin. not 2 much writing either but in a good way.
nice story, could have use some more detail.
nice story, could have use some more detail.
Maybe your Mountain Dog story could have used more detail, but your Gun Explanation is really detailed. Good job. I still think they both call out for pictures.
Great background. Fantastic music.
$B+
Graham, I just noticed your musket moving pictures. Awesome. I have changed your pay grade for Week 5 to $A.
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